2023 AHS PRELIM P1 Editing answer

Section A: Editing Line Error Answer Error Type Comments 1 ✓ -Subject (matter) is the main thing a story refers to; usually a concrete thing and specific -a person or thing that is being discussed, described, or dealt with (Oxford University) 2 have has SVA 3 or and conjunction 4 on in preposition 5 but though / although conjunction X: where / when (rel pron) https://blog.teacherprix.com/what s-the-difference-between-but- although/ Although / though highlights a surprising result; used as subordinating conjunction But / whereas to show contrast 6 ✓ can/could - grammatically correct; could highlights lower probability 7 that this pronoun X: the (article; no change in error type) Backward reference 8 looking looks verb form 9 an the article 10 announces announced tense