TMJC 2021 H2 History P1 Marking Guide
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Text from the first pages1 TMJC [PRELIMS 2021] H2 HISTORY PAPER 1 MARKING GUIDE SECTION A Question 1 – Part A (10 marks) LVL MARKS DESCRIPTOR L0 0 No evidence submitted or answer does not address the question. L1 1 – 3 The answer is likely to be characterised by paraphrasing or quotation and will be largely uncritical. Very simple comparisons may be made and these are not developed (e.g. that one source is a letter and the other is a speech). Answers that are simply based on contextual knowledge, with no source us e, should be credited at this level. At the upper end of the level, there may be some attempt to explain how far the sources corroborate and/or differ (i.e. supported with source details), but any explanation will be confused or impartial. L2 4 – 6 The answer will use both sources. There will be clear explanation on how far the sources corroborate and/or differ (i.e. supported with source details), though insights into why are less likely or are less successful. At the lower end of the level, there may be a tendency to treat the sources separately with most or all the comparison implicit. L3 7 – 8 The answer will make good use of both sources. There will be clear explanation on how far the sources corroborate and/or differ. The answer will demonstrate a sense of critical evaluation of the sources and provide some insights into why they are similar/and or different . Answers which argue that the sources entirely agree or disagree with each other (i.e. one sided) but demonstrate critical insight, may also be found in this level. Answers which are uneven (e.g. extracting information from a source at face value, and showing more critical insight in the analysis of the other source) may also be found at this level. L4 9 - 10 The answer will make full comprehensive use of both sources . There will be clear explanation on how far the sources corroborate and differ . The answer will demonstrate a strong sense of critical evaluation of the sources throughout and provide insights into why they are similar or different .
2 (a) Compare and contrast the evidence provided in Sources A and C regarding Soviet involvement in Cuba. [10] Similarity Soviet involvement in Cuba was on the side of Cuba. Difference Difference – motivation for soviet involvement Insights Possible reason for similarity – Source A: Khrushchev to Kennedy, and thus likely purpose is -> bring in CK. Source C, as published by an American newspaper, thus has the likely purpose of -> bring in CK Possible reason for difference – Source A: Khrushchev to Kennedy, and thus likely purpose is -> bring in CK. Source C, as published by an American newspaper, thus has the likely purpose of -> bring in CK Source A - Khrushchev to Kennedy, and thus likely to have the purpose to paint the US as the one who forced USSR’s hand to come to the defense of Cuba. ->bring in CK Source B – written by an American newpaper, and thus has the likely purpose to portray Soviet Union as the manipulator, with Castro in Khrushchev’s pocket. -> bring in CK Question 1 – Part B (30 marks) LVL MARKS DESCRIPTOR L0 0 No evidence submitted or answer does not address the question. L2 1 - 4 The answer will make limited use of the sources. The sources may be paraphrased or described. Some relevant information from the sources will be extracted at face value to support and/or challenge the hypothesis, but the answer may be confused or undeveloped. L3 5 - 10 The answer will use relevant information from sources at face value to support and/or challenge the hypothesis. Sources may be used in isolation. The answer may demonstrate some awareness of provenance of the sources but evaluation of the sources is unlikely . L4 11 - 15 The answer will begin to treat sources as a set , although one or two sources may be neglected at the lower level. It will demonstrate some understanding of the question . Some sources may be cross-referenced to support and/or challenge the hypothesis. There will be an attempt to evaluate sources, but the sources will not be placed in context. L5 16 - 20 The answer will treat sources as a set and make good use of the sources . It will demonstrate a clear understanding of the question. Sources may be cross-referenced to support and/or challenge the hypothesis. There will be an attempt to evaluate the sources in context but there will be gaps, unevenness and a lack of balance. L6 21 - 25 The answer will treat sources as a set and make very good use of the sources . It will demonstrate a good understanding of the question . Sources may be cross-referenced to support and/or challenge the hypothesis. The answer will demonstrate a critical evaluation of the sources in context to support and challenge the hypothesis (that is, balanced). L7 26 - 30 The answer will treat sources as a set and make excellent use of the sources. It will demonstrate a very good understanding of the question . The answer will demonstrate a critical evaluation of the sources in context to support and challenge the hypothesis (that is, balanced). It may question how far a conclusion can be reached using the evidence in the sources . It will EITHER explain fully why evidence to challenge or to support the hypothesis is better / preferred, OR justify an amended/alternative historical interpretation where appropriate . For L6, the L5 answer must also be secure.
3 (b) How far do Sources A-F support the argument that the spread of the Cold War rivalry beyond Europe was due to Soviet expansionism? [30] Support Challenge Nuanced B, C A, D E, F SECTION B Band Marks Quality of the Answer 0 0 No evidence submitted or the answer does not address the question. 1 1-8 The essay will be characterised by significant irrelevance or argument that does not begin to make significant points . The essay may mention historical concepts but these will not be understood. The answers may be largely fragmentary and incoherent. 2 9-12 The essay will not be properly focused on the requirements of the question . There may be many unsupported assertions and commentaries that lack sufficient factual support. The essay may include references to historical concepts but these may not be fully understood. Where appropriate, the essay may mention the existence of other historical interpretations but this may not be explained. The argument may be of limited relevance to the topic and there may be confusion about the implications of the question. 3 13-15 The essay will offer some appropriate factual material but there will be l ittle attempt generally to link factual material to the requirements of the question . The approach will lack analysis. The essay will include some references to historical concepts but these may not be used to develop the analysis. Where appropriate, the essay may mention the existence of other historical interpretations, though this may be implicit. The quality of the descripti on or narrative, although sufficiently accurate and relevant to the topic if not the particular question, will not be linked effectively to the argument . The structure will show weaknesses and the treatment of topics within the essay will be unbalanced. The writing may show some accuracy but there will also be frequent errors. 4 16-18 The essay will indicate attempts to argue relevantly, although often implicitly. The approach will depend more on some heavily descriptive or narrative passages than on analysis or explanation, which may be limited to introductions and conclusions . The essay will show evidence of knowledge of historical concepts and attempts may be made to use historical concepts to
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